Crying Machine Solo Tab

hey this is my first tab,n im only 14 so if its wrong soz.
My guitar teacher tought me this and it soundz ok its not exact but it'll do.
 
OK here goes the solo.
 
E----------9-9---------9-9-------------------------------|
B--12b(14)-----12b(14)-----12b(14)r12-9------------------|
G---------------------------------------11p9--11b(13)-9--|
D--------------------------------------------------------|
A--------------------------------------------------------|
E--------------------------------------------------------|
 
strike thise note once and bend
   \/
E---------------------------------------------------------|
B--11b(12)r11b(12)r11p9-----------------------------------|
G-----------------------11p9~~-11-9-11b(13)r11p9-----9----|
D------------------------------------------------11-9--11-|
A---------------------------------------------------------|
E---------------------------------------------------------|
 
E----------------------------------------------------------------|
B--17b(19)r17b(19)r17b(19)r17b(21)r17-14--14-17-17b(21)-(21)r17--|
G---------------------------------------16-----------------------|
D----------------------------------------------------------------|
A----------------------------------------------------------------|
E----------------------------------------------------------------|
 
E------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B--16b(17)r16b(17)r16-14-------------------------------------------------|
G-----------------------16-15-16-15-16--15/13\15/11b(13)r11-9------------|
D------------------------------------------------------------11-9--------|
A----------------------------------------------------------------9/7-----|
E-------------------------------------------------------------------9/7--|
 
kind of a slower bend than the rest
E---------4----4-------4--------------------|
B--7b( 9 )-7b(9)-7b(9)--7-4-4---------------|
G--------------------------6-6p4p0-6p0-6-4--|
D-------------------------------------------|
A-------------------------------------------|
E-------------------------------------------|
 
E-----2/4h7-4-4----------------------------------------|
B--2/4-------7-7b(9)-(9)r7-4-7-7-4-7-7-4-7-7-4-7/9-7~--|
G---------------------------6-----6-----6-----6--------|
D------------------------------------------------------|
A------------------------------------------------------|
E------------------------------------------------------|
 
hey soz but thats all i know any suggestions or comments plz e-mail
ssj4james74@hotmail.com.
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