Occams Razor Tab

This is my first tab, I probably need to work on the formatting a bit but everything
sounds correct to me.
 
E|--0-0-0-0|
B|--3-3-3-3|
G|--2-2-2-2| let ring (x2)
D|--0-0-0-0|
A|--0-0-0-0|
D|--0-0-0-0|
 
 
 
E|--0-0-0-4|
B|--3-3-3-3|
G|--2-2-2-2| let ring long(x1)
D|--0-0-0-0|
A|--0-0-0-0|
D|--0-0-0-0|
 
 
This part is on an acoustic guitar but it can be played on electric as well:
 
E|--00-0-00--------00-0-00|
B|--22-2-22--------00-0-00|
G|--22-2-22--------22-2-22|
D|--00-0-00--------33-3-33|
A|--00-0-00--------00-0-00|
D|--xx-x-xx--------xx-x-xx|
 
And then back to the starting riff:
 
E|--0-0-0-0|
B|--3-3-3-3|
G|--2-2-2-2| let ring (x1)
D|--0-0-0-0|
A|--0-0-0-0|
D|--0-0-0-0|
 
E|--0-0-0-4|
B|--3-3-3-3|
G|--2-2-2-2| let ring long (x1)
D|--0-0-0-0|
A|--0-0-0-0|
D|--0-0-0-0|
 
((Electronic sound effects)
 
E|------------|
B|------------|
G|------------|
D|------------|  with reverb (x2)
A|-------/8-/4|
D|-1-0--------|
 
The next part is played a little differently and the first A at 5th is played a bit short.
 
E|----------------|
B|----------------|
G|----------------|
D|----------------|  with reverb (x2) fade out
A|-------5-5/8-8/4|
D|-1-1-0----------|
 
Questions and comments are welcome, feel free to give suggestions on the tab or formatting.
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